The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works.

The given diagram provides information about function of water pump which works with help of solar energy.

Overall, there are 4 main stages in whole process of operating water pump with help of solar panels, beginning with getting energy from sun by solar panel and ending with transfering water in water tank to villages.

In first step, photovoltaic cells in solar panel which works in simillar way of planet's photosynthesis, receives energy from sun and store it panel, then with help of wire which is connected to bore pump, solar panel will operate dc power. furthermore bore pump is located into underground bore or well which also contains water. After that with assistance of dc power and bore pump water is going to pumped up in huge tank which is locater on surface. In last stage of process water in stored tank is going to be transferred to villages for people's usage.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'panels'?
Suggestion: panels
..., receives energy from sun and store it panel, then with help of wire which is connec...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ump, solar panel will operate dc power. furthermore bore pump is located into underground b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...ump, solar panel will operate dc power. furthermore bore pump is located into underground b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 402, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'pump'
Suggestion: pump
...c power and bore pump water is going to pumped up in huge tank which is locater on sur...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88815789474 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46990192365 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.713049846 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257383326513 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144488570095 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602184727761 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200429151261 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140788128133 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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