The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Manufacturing brick is a complicated process but it’s necessary for the building industry. The final shape of bricks will be gotten by many stages, from the initial digging the clay to the eventual production of bricks.
It’s clear that the seven distinct stages are shown on the flow diagram.
At the first stage in the manufacturing brick process, clay is gathered by the digger machine from the land. The step after this, the clay is filtered by metal grid and the outcomes will be put on the roller. Overtime , it will be mixed by water and sand to be coherent. As a result, it is started to be solid. To get the final shape of bricks, the solid clay will be cut by wire cutter or will be poured in mould. Gradually, bricks are heated by drying oven. The temperature of the kiln is started by 200°C to 980°C. At this point ,the temperature reach to 1300°C as the maximum . After that the brick is gotten colder by the cooling chamber from two to three days. Next, the bricks are collected by the packaging section. The final stage it’s delivered by the trucks to the market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...omes will be put on the roller. Overtime , it will be mixed by water and sand to b...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...started by 200°C to 980°C. At this point ,the temperature reach to 1300°C as the m...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mperature reach to 1300°C as the maximum . After that the brick is gotten colder b...
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Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rature reach to 1300°C as the maximum . After that the brick is gotten colder by the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55102040816 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41988244294 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3284545965 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.7142857143 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102963208933 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418618381894 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067357794797 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863960945147 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050920140407 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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