The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagram depicts information about the phases and apparatus that are used to make cement and further how it is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Overall, the emerging fact from the picture is that the production of cement involves five stages, the process begins with mixing raw materials and finish with the packaging of new cement whereas concrete making is a simple process which involves only four ingredients to mix in a concrete mixer.

Looking in more details at the limestone and clay that are crushed and the resulting powder is then mixed before passed through the rotating heater. Nextly, once the powder is heated the mixture travel over the conveyor belt and ground through the grinder. As a result, the cement has been produced, it is packed and transported to the building to make concrete.

Marching forward, concrete is made up of half gravel, quarter sand, 10% water and 15% cement. Likewise, all of these components are added together in a cylindrical drum and rotate until the concrete is yielded.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, look, then, whereas, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05202312139 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48562978764 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0688803014 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347310407648 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139311382478 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160093995788 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208879436931 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168488883877 0.0819641961636 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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