The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features ad make comparisons where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...llecting water for cultivation aims. First of all,in picture A is swing baske...
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... cultivation aims. First of all,in picture A is swing basket,two people st...
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...irst of all,in picture A is swing basket,two people stand near the water source whic...
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...e which has a depth of about 1-2 meters.Next , they also hold the basket which is ma...
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...ich has a depth of about 1-2 meters.Next , they also hold the basket which is made...
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...asket which is made of bamboo or leather..Besides,the ropes are connected with the...
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...ket which is made of bamboo or leather..Besides,the ropes are connected with the basket...
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...ch is made of bamboo or leather..Besides,the ropes are connected with the basket so ...
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...to lower the basket down to scoop water.After the basket is filled with water,two pea...
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...er.After the basket is filled with water,two peasants will pull it up and swing it o...
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...igation channel to the arable lands. Moving to the rope and bucket process,it...
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... Moving to the rope and bucket process,it is more difficult than the swing basket...
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...r source has a depth of about 50 meters.With that depth,this manner uses many tools ...
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...depth of about 50 meters.With that depth,this manner uses many tools such as slope, b...
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... such as slope, bucket, pulley, rollers.To begin with, an ox is attached to the pu...
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...n with, an ox is attached to the pulley.The second step is when the ox walks downhi...
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...x walks downhill, the rollers will turn.It leads to the bucket will be pulled up a...
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...ion channels will be poured by water Both of two manners use same technique l...
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...tivate fields and both have simple stage,However,there are differences between two of th...
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...ween two of them like the depth of water,the implementers and tools
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, second, so, such as, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86764705882 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83331921938 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612745098039 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.887922159 43.030603864 516% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.25 112.824112599 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 22.9334400587 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.75 5.23603664747 396% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126399097427 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932376263418 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771537275495 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102640767551 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646061463029 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.2329268293 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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