the following chart shows the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to Housing preferences of Uk people

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the following chart shows the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to Housing preferences of Uk people

The bar chart illustrates the housing preferences among the people who lived in Liverpool, London, and Manchester in 2009.
It is clear that living in an apartment was the most important choice among Liverpool residents, while people living in London and Manchester had a tendency towards semi-detached houses. In contrast, the lowest figure belonged to terraced houses in all cities.
Nearly 60% of Liverpool’s citizens chose apartments as a place to live, which approximately tripled in Manchester, at 20%. On the other hand, the percentages of people living in detached houses and semi-detached houses in Liverpool had the opposite tendency to apartments, which were around 15% and 20% respectively. These figures for Manchester were doubled for Liverpool. Terraced houses were the least popular housing option in both cities at 10% and around 12%.
Regarding the survey result in London, well over a third of the preferences went for semi-detached houses. This was followed by nearly 30% and 25% of citizens choosing apartments and detached houses respectively. On the contrary, the figure for terraced houses was lower, with slightly less than 20% of survey participants selecting them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, third, well, while, in contrast, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40625 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94782681725 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.050104022 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175205676424 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783581164775 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669084716062 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132415369377 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744852603353 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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