The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The line graph compares the proportion of people residing in cities in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia over a 70-year period.
It is clear that there are significant increases in the number of city residents in four Asian countries between 1970 and 2040. While Philippines saw a slight decrease in certain years, figures for the three other countries went up steadily throughout the period shown.
In 1970, percentages of the population living in cities in Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia were 30%, 18%, and 14% respectively, whereas Philippines had the biggest number of city dwellers, at around 31%. Over the following 20 years, these figures increased gradually. By 1990, the number of people in cities in Philippines had risen by approximately 17%, equivalent figures were 14%, 11%, and 10% for the others in the same year.
Between 1990 and 2020, while the percentages of the population living in cities in Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia increased considerably, Philippines saw a slight fall. Thailand had around 30% of population in cities, about 50% for Indonesia, and the largest number was roughly 75% for Malaysia in 2020. At the end of period, all four Asian countries are expected to rise their city dwellers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25628140704 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88195226318 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552763819095 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9527498706 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.222222222 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260988655941 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1146392261 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714772751215 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159219215188 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730660935818 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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