The graph below shows the number of passangers rail journeys made in great britain between 1950 and 2004 5

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... journeys from 1950 to 2004/05. Overall,the first thing to be considered Light rail...
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... first thing to be considered Light rail,which illustrated less than 300 millions.Two ...
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Suggestion: Two
...hich illustrated less than 300 millions.Two fundamental lines belong to London Unde...
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...onal rail network in the beginning years,but became to the last years there was dram...
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... years there was dramatically wwnt down.In the first three periods,London Undergro...
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...lly wwnt down.In the first three periods,London Underground is levelled off.Began with ...
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...iods,London Underground is levelled off.Began with 1980,it rapidy climbed with fluctu...
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...1980,it rapidy climbed with fluctuation.This two railways demonstrated upward trands...
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... trands with wild increase and decrases.Another interesting fact is that,this two railw...
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...ecrases.Another interesting fact is that,this two railway journeys reached a peak. O...
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...ll behind and illustrated small numbers.The railway started activity in 1960.Modest...
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Suggestion: Modestly
...rs.The railway started activity in 1960.Modestly fall down during 30 years and began mod...
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...erately increasing belong to Light rail.The highest millions,which this railway rea...
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...elong to Light rail.The highest millions,which this railway reached,is about 230 milli...
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...hest millions,which this railway reached,is about 230 millions.Another additional i...
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...s railway reached,is about 230 millions.Another additional information is,there was sha...
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Suggestion: , there
...llions.Another additional information is,there was sharply went up in 1980 and than wi...
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Suggestion: then
...s,there was sharply went up in 1980 and than wild bomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14482758621 4.92477711251 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38336140012 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724137931034 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.889880125 43.030603864 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.75 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127142513766 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112872658076 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119336324617 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112872658076 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119336324617 0.0819641961636 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.2329268293 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 61.2550243902 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.92 11.4140731707 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.06136585366 132% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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