The graph below shows the number of passangers rail journeys made in great britain between 1950 and 2004/5
This graph tries to introduce Great Britain's railway journeys from 1950 to 2004/05.
Overall,the first thing to be considered Light rail,which illustrated less than 300 millions.Two fundamental lines belong to London Underground and National rail network.
Ther was a positive development in National rail network in the beginning years,but became to the last years there was dramatically wwnt down.In the first three periods,London Underground is levelled off.Began with 1980,it rapidy climbed with fluctuation.This two railways demonstrated upward trands with wild increase and decrases.Another interesting fact is that,this two railway journeys reached a peak.
One major disadvantage of Light rail is fall behind and illustrated small numbers.The railway started activity in 1960.Modestly fall down during 30 years and began moderately increasing belong to Light rail.The highest millions,which this railway reached,is about 230 millions.Another additional information is,there was sharply went up in 1980 and than wild bomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14482758621 4.92477711251 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38336140012 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724137931034 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.889880125 43.030603864 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.75 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127142513766 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112872658076 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119336324617 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112872658076 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119336324617 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.2329268293 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 61.2550243902 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.92 11.4140731707 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.06136585366 132% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.