The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant

The line illustrates the recycling materials of, Paper& cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans and plastics through 1982 to 2010
From the graph we can see that overall, paper& cardboard rose highly through the three years, glass containers dropped in a year but had a climb, aluminum cans rose significantly through 27 years, and plastics remain unchanged
Paper& cardboard and plastics consumed to be the easiest to recycle although paper& cardboard hit a low in the 1982 but then grow till 1990 and had a decrease again in 2006. Plastics on the other hand remained at roughly the same level until 2010 it went up.
Not the easiest to recycle but made hits glass containers rose dramatically increased from 1986 to 2010 which was at its highest peak, aluminum cans was stable in 1982 but the suddenly fall in 1990 but then went up stable and hit a growth in 2010.

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The line illustrates the recycling materials of, Paper& cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans and plastics through 1982 to 2010

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