The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development
The maps illustrate the present central area of a town called Islip and its site after the projected development took place.
Overall, it is evident that the most principal change is the construction of a dual carriageway encompassing the town centre. Another striking development is the addition of housing, commercial and traffic facilities.
In the present, it is clearly seen that there was a main road crossing Islip in East-West direction, with two lines of shops located in both sides of it. This main road is in close proximity to the countryside in the North and the housing area in the South, which can be reached from two smaller lanes, built to the East and West of it. While the one to the East leads to a school and another residential site, a park was located at the end of the other.
If the plan for develoment is to take place, the central area of Islip will transform completely. As mentioned, a circular dual carriageway will be surrounding the town centre, leading to the disappeance of the countryside. The main road will also be pedestrianized and to the North of it, there will be a bus stop, a shopping centre, a car park and a newly-added housing area. More houses is projected to be built on the South part of the town, making the size of the park reduced tremendously. Moreover, there will be no changes made to the school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
... both sides of it. This main road is in close proximity to the countryside in the North and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79134326485 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5253530033 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163059889636 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656933892924 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754302844477 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120599956316 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907277822098 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.