The maps below show the information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.
The map illustrates the infrastructures of Riverage college that has been changed for 3 decades.
it is clear that, the map shows two main categories. On the one hand, in the West part of the college, there has been no change in the position and area of sport hall building. The reception room in the main building of college is located in the first floor as it was 30 years ago.
On the other hand, the car park area is no longer exist, which has been replaced by trees in the East part of college. The music room has been constructed in the basement of the main building, which is situated just below the reception room, while the four office room in the same building has been merged into one room, which is now used for the Art-Class room. there has not been any change in the number of floors of the building that is sited between the main building and the sport hall, however that building has been resized to become narrower. Moreover, the refractory and common room inside this building has been replaced by office an café rooms, respectively. The map also indicates that, the flower area has been replaced by a staircase, which make it accessible to the sport hall.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...that has been changed for 3 decades. it is clear that, the map shows two main...
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Suggestion: It
...as been changed for 3 decades. it is clear that, the map shows two main c...
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Suggestion:
... first floor as it was 30 years ago. On the other hand, the car park area is ...
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Suggestion: There
...ich is now used for the Art-Class room. there has not been any change in the number o...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...is building has been replaced by office an café rooms, respectively. The map also ...
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Suggestion:
...ake it accessible to the sport hall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58685446009 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39837646306 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0941692432 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153464764968 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801774590438 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083453198594 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168266103461 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882322823747 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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