Numbers of Vietnamese immigrating to the US from 1980 to 2017Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Numbers of Vietnamese immigrating to the US from 1980 to 2017

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the amount of Vietnamese immigrating to the US between 1980 and 2017

Overall, the number of Vietnamese immigrating to US increased quickly. The Vietnamese immigrating increased high from 1980 to 2000. However, Vietnamese immigrating increased low in from 2010 to 2017.

From 1980 to 2000, Vietnamese immigrating To US is 988000 people. The Vietnamese immigrating to US increased highest in 1990 to 2000 and it increased nearly 400000 people

In 2017, immigrating was 13430000 people. In addition, the lowest increased nearly 100000 people between 2010 and 2017.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 504.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 90.0 196.424390244 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.08007028824 3.73543355544 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04849689738 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 42.0 106.607317073 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 131.4 283.868780488 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.129430199 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267066041759 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183684923767 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102175869292 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188531228829 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943314815459 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 40.7170731707 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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