Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table illustrates the number of World Health Statistics in 2016

overall,the number of deaths before age five, worldwide was highest while the number of deaths due to traffic accidents,worldwide was lowest.

The figures for deaths before age five, worldwide and deaths due to pollution from cooking fuels, worldwide are higher than other facts , at 5,9 million and 4,3 million respectively. It is remarkable that 3 million of Deaths due to outdoor pollution, worldwide

Likewise, the total people of New cases of HIV, worldwide and people needing treatment for neglected tropical disease, worldwide are 2 million and 1,7 million respectively. Also, number of deaths due to traffic accident account for lower proportions, at 1,2 million.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...er of World Health Statistics in 2016 overall,the number of deaths before age five, w...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...orld Health Statistics in 2016 overall,the number of deaths before age five, world...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...er of deaths before age five, worldwide was highest while the number of deaths due to traff...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , worldwide
...umber of deaths due to traffic accidents,worldwide was lowest. The figures for deaths be...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s, worldwide are higher than other facts , at 5,9 million and 4,3 million respecti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 636.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 116.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48275862069 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03670294234 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1227536571 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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