Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates number of Vietnamese immigrating to the US between 1980 and 2017

Overall, the number of Vietnamese immigrating to US increased quickly. The Vietnamese immigrating increased highest from 1980 to 2000. The Vietnamese immigrating increased lowest in from 2010 to 2017.

From 1980 to 2000, the Vietnamese immigrating To US is 988000 person. The Vietnamese immigrating to US increased highest in 1990 to 2000 and increased nearly 400000 person

In 2017,the immigrating was 13430000 person. In addition, the lowest increased nearly 100000 people between 2010 and 2017.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
... Vietnamese immigrating To US is 988000 person. The Vietnamese immigrating to US incre...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...US increased highest in 1990 to 2000 and increased nearly 400000 person In 2017...
^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...90 to 2000 and increased nearly 400000 person In 2017,the immigrating was 13430000 ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
... In 2017,the immigrating was 13430000 person. In addition, the lowest increased near...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 506.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 89.0 196.424390244 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68539325843 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.07147865564 3.73543355544 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04280782496 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 38.0 106.607317073 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426966292135 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 131.4 283.868780488 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6448028658 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.13 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 8.06136585366 76% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 40.7170731707 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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