The pie chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where

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The pie chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of boys and girls who take part in different cultural and leisure activities that boys and girls take part in. Overall, boys prefer playing computer games and playing basketball while girls are more likely to enjoy dancing and reading. girls tend to prefer physical activities than boys (girls and boys share many similar favorites, especially physical activities).

The left chart shows what boys often do. Looking at the first chart, the activity boys prefer the most is playing computer games, with 34% while the least favorite, with only 2%. Boys also like other physical activities such as playing basketball, soccer, and skateboarding, with 26%, 17%, and 11%, respectively. The other is Listening listening to music, with 10%, ranks 5th in terms of popularity, with 10% of boys.

According to the second chart of girls, the percentage of girls who largest number of them like dancing is the highest (dùng đúng đơn vị của bài - phần trăm - number là “số lượng”), at 27%. Interestingly, while the percentage of boys who enjoy prefer reading is very low, girls tend to like it much more, with 21% compared to only 2%, followed by reading, playing computer games, and playing netball account for 16% and, 15%, respectively. Also, girls seem not to be interested in listening to music, with only it also contains up to 11%.

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