The pie charts show that the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare patterns of Electricity Generation between Germany and France in 2009, and it is measured in billions kWh. Overall, it can be seen that conventional thermal took up the lion's share in Germany, whereas nuclear was the main source of electricity in France.
In Germany, the total output was 560 billion kWh, came mostly from conventional thermal at 59,6% accounting for more than a half of total proportion while the proportion of electricity generated from nuclear power was only 23,0%, only one-fifth of the total types. In contrast to Germany, the total output of France was lower at 510 billion kWh, came mostly from nuclear power at 76,0% while conventional thermal was not a major source with only 10,3% was used.
Moving on to renewables which accounted for quite similar proportion for both countries at 17,4% in Germany and at 13,7% in France. Renewable energy consisted of biomass (39,3%) and wind (36,9%) were used mostly to produce electricity in Germany, which was far higher than hydroelectric (17,7%) and solar (6,1%). A reversed pattern was applied to France, where hydroelectric made up 80,5% of renewable energy whereas just a modest share of the total proportion was allocated for biomass and wind, never exceeding more than a fifth in total.
- Many people believe that an effective transport system is a key component of a modern city. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public transport. 78
- The pie charts show that the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05213270142 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65983623174 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535545023697 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9359619741 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.666666667 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138512904777 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798433099596 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657508860208 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119889414549 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07493432012 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.