Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree
Sending criminals to prison is a common way to punish them, but some people think it is not effective. They believe that education and job training should be used instead. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement.
Prison can be a deterrent for criminals and help to maintain law and order in society. This would therefore reduce the likelihood of reoffending and promote safety in society.
Education and job training programs may not be suitable for all types of offenders. It's important to recognize that some criminals may not want to change their behavior, and there may not be enough resources to provide everyone with such programs. This would in turn make it challenging to implement such programs.
Moreover, education and job training programs may not be effective for all types of crimes. For instance, individuals who have committed violent crimes may require different approaches to rehabilitation.
In conclusion, sending criminals to prison is an effective way of punishing them and maintaining social order. Education and job training programs may not be suitable for all offenders and types of crimes. It is essential to recognize that alternative approaches may be required to deal with different types of criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'implementing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: implementing
... This would in turn make it challenging to implement such programs. Moreover, education an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27135678392 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93748574541 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.463154445 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6923076923 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337947363101 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12767919403 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11388334336 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206155723297 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145563007405 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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