It is sometimes said that countries should produce all the food for their populations to eat and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly thought that nations should try to minimize food imports and maximize their own production. While I understand why some people support this view, I would still firmly disagree with it since I believe that self-producing and importing food from abroad are of equal importance.
Advocates of countries producing their own food may have numerous arguments. Regarding the former, these nations offer numerous benefits. This is because local food production can support the domestic economy by creating jobs and reducing import costs. Such advantages not only generate employment opportunities in agriculture and related industries but also decrease the fee on transport and tax from imported food, thereby boosting local economies. As far as the second idea is concerned, self-producing can additionaly be a huge opening for local cuisine heritage. Evidence for this can be seen in domestic markets where they have the opportunity to grow and sell their own food while maintaining traditional recipes and cooking methods.
Despite the aforementioned valid reasons, I would assert that importing food is as important as producing food. The first factor contributing to this is the unavailability of some types of ingredients in many countries. In fact, these countries live in locations where only certain vegetables can be grown, meaning that they have to purchase them internationally. As a result, they can access a wide variety of foods that may not be locally available, enhancing dietary diversity. Another point worth mentioning is that importing food from abroad can also boost the economy. This may stem from trading relationships and economic ties with other countries, while supporting related industries such as shipping, logistics, and retail. This can result in economic growth.
In conclusion, it is understandable why some people advocate the idea of self-producing food. However, I take the view that the role of own productions and food import are equally necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, regarding, second, so, still, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4854368932 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04888378537 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57928802589 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6995349024 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7058823529 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184617650508 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067159263953 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558452530412 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129978378553 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298389166091 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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