Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree
While imprisonment is a common way of punishing criminals, some people believe that it is an ineffective solution and support the use of education and job training instead. From my perspective, I thoroughly disagree with this statement.
Mostly, Jail is a deterrent for criminals and help to maintain law. This would therefore reduce the relapse and promote safety for society.
Education and job training programs may not be suitable for all types of convicts. For example, offenders have no interest in the course, or people having limited or learning disabilities, as well as the lack of resources to provide for everyone. And so on, make it challenging to execute such programs.
Moreover, applying education and job training programs to individuals who have committed violent crimes may not bring any results. For instance, they require different specialized interventions and punishments.
In conclusion, sending criminals to prison is an efficient way of punishing them and maintaining law and order in society. It is important to recognize that different offenders may require different approaches to gain effective recovery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...relapse and promote safety for society. Education and job training programs may ...
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Message: Did you mean 'executing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: executing
...veryone. And so on, make it challenging to execute such programs. Moreover, applying edu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52571428571 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10890754485 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9640648176 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9090909091 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223270586498 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698945411532 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747580174038 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107966563861 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666867932164 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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