Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree
In recent years, some have criticized the effectiveness of imprisoning criminals and propose that job training and education should be used instead. In my opinion, I agree with the latter.
Imprisonment can have negative consequences, with returning to crime being one of them. This would therefore perpetuate a cycle of criminal behavior.
Education and job training programs, on the other hand, can provide offenders with the necessary skills for successful re-entry into society. Thereby reducing the likelihood that they will return to crime.
However, it's important to note that education and job training may not be effective for all criminals. Individuals who have committed violent crimes may not be suitable for such programs, which would in turn require alternative approaches for rehabilitation.
In conclusion, prioritizing education and job training over imprisonment can decrease recidivism rates and promote a more productive and sustainable society. Nevertheless, different types of offenders require different approaches to ensure that they are effectively rehabilitated.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94303797468 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23764336544 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1879836846 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261539838125 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101112822543 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118786875015 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151060243154 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125331368647 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94303797468 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23764336544 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1879836846 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261539838125 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101112822543 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118786875015 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151060243154 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125331368647 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 11.4140731707 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.