The table below gives information about the values NZ of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012

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The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.

The table compares the value of kiwi’s export from New Zealand to five different markets Japan, China, Mexico, Russia, and Saudi Arabia in a period of two years starting from 2010.
Overall, as can be seen from the table, the figure for the export of kiwi fruit from NZ to five countries witnessed an upward trend. Japan and China have the highest consumption of kiwi fruit while Saudi Arabia has the most insignificant consumption of this fruit.
In 2010, Japan had the highest number of exported kiwi from NZ at $271.000.000 and became the largest market. This is followed by this figure for China and Saudi Arabia, at $74.900.000 and $29.000.000, respectively. By contrast, the figure for export kiwi of Mexico and Russia was the lowest, at just around $1.000.000.
In the next two years, the export to Japan’s market remained unchanged an upward trend. This figure for Japan had increased significantly to $325.300.000 while there was about $20.000.000 value of kiwi fruit exported to China. Besides, the figure for export to Russia was two times higher than that in 2010, at $2.404.000 and the figure for Mexico halved to $3.300.000. In contrast, the exporting value of Saudi Arabia was dropped to $82.000 from a good start of $29.000.000 in 2010.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88625592417 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46409950043 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502369668246 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5585602098 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.1 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23741019076 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123465009692 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095494890567 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195563154427 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888623650628 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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