The table below shows information about age average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA

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The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA.

The table gives information regarding the population in three states in the USA divided by age and economic status.
Overall, it can be seen than the situations in Utah are more secure than Florida and California.
As per the table, the highest proportion of young people is in Utah. Nearly 28% of its population is under 18, which is more than 10% than Florida’s (16%) and California’s (17%). On the other hand, the older population is the highest in Florida. The rate of people who is over 60 in Florida is 23%, which is exactly 10 more than California’s and 15 more than Utah’s.
Turning to the annual earnings of an average individual, California stands first. This accounts for $23,000, which is $1000 more than an individual in Florida, and $6000 more than a resident of Utah. However, 16% of its population live under the poverty line, which is 4% more than in Florida. Utah has the least proportion of people living under the poverty line (9%).

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7125748503 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67525985854 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8201917246 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120284007673 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675075453988 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875969130128 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108231166556 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118967256875 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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