The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001

Essay topics:

The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

Overall, it is clearly seen that the amount of money spent on some kinds of commodities increased over the year and most of the expenditure went for food.
A closer look at the statistics reveals that in 1991, the average quantity of money spent on food each month was top-charted at 155 dollars, far exceeding the following figure. In the subsequent decade, the Australian witnessed a slight rise by 5 dollars in the money spent on food. It is observed in the table that the expenditure on housing was higher than that of electricity and water by a wide margin, with the disparity of virtually 20 dollars. The figures then both followed upwards trends with the latter at 120 and its counterpart at 100 dollars.
In contrast, from the initial figure of 70 dollars, the money invested in transportation underwent a dramatical decline to merely 45 dollars. Likewise, there was a modest reduction by 10 dollars in the amount of expenditures on clothing, making it the lowest position.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, look, so, then, as to, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86904761905 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84242239637 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5437644009 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106747521499 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456042747521 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353124299696 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599951193307 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371679795962 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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