environmental pollution
It is beyond doubt that nowadays environmental pollution represents a major threat on Earth; however some individuals seem to show a remarkable ignorance of such facts. There are many justifications for such problem, which can lead to detrimental consequences, but I believe that we still have time to tackle this issue and reduce the negative human impact on this planet.
It is evident that environmental protection may contradict with human benefits. Obviously, some companies and organizations weigh importance on economic growth more. For instance, in order to save more financial budget, businesses may discharge waste without treatment into the environment. To be more specific, untreated industrial sewage was disposed to the water resources such as rivers and ocean, which can trigger digestive organ-associated ailments. In addition, although plastic package causes irrevocable damage to the environment, its cost is much lower; thus, it is reasonable for producers to choose this kind of packaging. Furthermore, because of their own comfort, people are not willing to lead an eco-friendly lifestyle. For example, despite increasing the greenhouse gas emission, travelling by car is safer and more pleasant.
There are various measures that governments and individuals could take to prevent, or at least mitigate, the problem. It is obvious that the government takes the main liability to protect the environment so if the public do not consider this as their responsibility, it is the government that has to tackle this. They could raise people’s awareness about the compromise between prosperity and environmental sustainability by running campaigns and educating the residents about the detrimental consequences of destroying the environment and improving their understanding about what to do to protect the environment. Moreover, the government can also use legal tools to stop people from polluting activities. For instance, they can impose green taxes on drivers, companies and other polluters, and they could invest the national budget in renewable energy production from solar, wind and water.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons for people’s lack of attention to the environment protection, but by using feasible solutions, the problem will soon be addressed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., some companies and organizations weigh importance on economic growth more. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6773255814 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21535150954 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7764273346 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190959522695 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057282900943 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766827802419 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978473001052 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579874229076 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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