Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Regarding the issue of advertisement, there has been a considerable controversy about making use of sports events for products’ promotion. From my perspective, albeit certain drawbacks, the merits are far more significant.
On the one hand, adverts in sports can exert devastating impacts on both individuals and societal level. Undoubtedly, constant advertisements can cause annoyance and disturbance as they spoil the games which the television viewers can do nothing but accept them passively. Take the football matches as examples, there are numerous intervals during 90 minutes for commercial purposes, affecting the mood of the fan. Additionally, some conglomerates also have celebrities endorsement, which can divert the spectators’ attention to the products rather than the events. It is beyond doubt that advertising commodities via sports events can result in conflict of interest. In fact, the performers, teams and even the whole championship are manipulated to suit the sponsors, deceiving the sports fan and making it injustice for others.
On the other hand, commercing goods during sports events can derive innumerable benefits. Evidently, without excessive amount of money sponsored by large businesses, some sports events can not afford to be organised . For instance, only by millions of dollars received by commercials can the FIFA Championship cover revenue costs, equipment, publicity…. Were there not sponsorship, the tickets’ price may be exorbitant; as a result, individuals would be discouraged from engaging in such occasions and the organisations may encounter bankruptcy. Furthermore, due to the enormous quantity of sports fans, advertisements can boost sales, bolster the companies’ images and have the entrepreneurs have higher revenue.
In conclusion, it is obvious that the advantages of commodities’ promotion in sports outweigh the demerits. It is highly recommended that the governments should restrict the amount of time that the adverts appeared.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ts events can not afford to be organised . For instance, only by millions of dolla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83276450512 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31739386278 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648464163823 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5171910762 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194798236368 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650263790425 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579535023198 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112849960828 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01691683128 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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