The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

Essay topics:

The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

The table compares the proportion of the population of one town cycled in 2011 which is divided into 5 categories.

In general, it can be seen that both females and males from age groups 0-9 took up half of the population. Another noticeable feature is that the percentage of all female age groups was higher than male groups.

For the age group of 0-9, the number of people from both genders had the highest percentage, 51,3% female and 50,3% male respectively; while this number was lower in the population of 10-17 age group of female, the percentage for the male group from 10 to 17 years old was half lower than 0 to 9 age group of male.

The figures for the age group of 18-39 and 40-59 were much lower. In the former group, 17% of women cycled, compared to nearly 10% of men. Between the ages of 40 and 59, the figures decreased further to 12% for women and 8 % for men. However, the percentage of the over 60 groups who rode bicycles rose significantly, reaching 18,5% and 13%, respectively.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age groups was higher than male groups. For the age group of 0-9, the number of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54945054945 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51471823819 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2107429891 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310172340077 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130292606751 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749993413084 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183674163059 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430988140476 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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