The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club s activities facilities and opening hours Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make any comparisons whe

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The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.

The rendered table depicts the information pertaining the reviews of male and female members from the city sports club about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours. The data has been calibrated in percentage.

At a fleeting glance, it is vivid that more than half a percentage of men are well satisfied with the facilities of club. 5% and 10% of males has unsatisfied with it. However, in terms of opening hours, 45% of men are very satisfied closely followed by the percentage of males who are not satisfied with 37%.

Moving further, the majority of female members are satisfied with opening hours and club facilities each reporting 64 and 72 percentage respectively. Nevertheless, the level of very satisfied and satisfied women members is exactly the same which is 35% and only 5% less than the ratio of dissatisfied females about the range of activities in the club.

Overall, male members are much pleased with the club's activities and facilities, although female members are more satisfied with opening hours.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78536743881 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.377780958 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223390526958 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105011111394 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999679187999 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163064239843 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809758013496 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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