The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994 according to United Nations statistics

Essay topics:

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

The given table provides a comparison of underlying factors in terms of society and economy among four nations in 1994, based on United Nations statistics.

From an overall perspective, all of indicators such as annual income, life expectancy, daily calorie supply, adult literacy rate in Canada and Japan was superior when compared with Peru, Zaire.

According to the recorded data in annual income and life expectancy, it is clear that the Canadian and Japanese resident could earn 11,100 and 15,760 US dollars respectively per year. Subsequently, in the same time, inhabitants' income from Peru and Zaire was merely 160 and 130 respectively, which is nearly less than 10 times as Canada and Japan. Following that, the life expectancy at birth of one person in Canada and Japan reached to 76 and 78 respectively while this number was 51 and 47 in the two others.

Moving to the two remaining indicators, the supplement of daily calorie for each individual hosted the highest rank in Canada, with the statistic was up to 3326 calorie. Next, the Japanese' daily calorie accounted for 2864 calorie while these number in Peru and Zaire was under 2000. Moreover, the adult literacy rate in Canada and Japan met at the same record, which was 99̀̀% people in this nations. Finally, in the same section, the adult in Peru had literacy was 68% and Zaire was 34%.

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Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'calorie' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'calories'.
Suggestion: calories
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'calorie' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'calories'.
Suggestion: calories
...panese daily calorie accounted for 2864 calorie while these number in Peru and Zaire wa...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... same record, which was 99̀̀% people in this nations. Finally, in the same section, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96069868996 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57216731529 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593886462882 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3866240681 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962072944254 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427604859482 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695708606554 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786928322683 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881629089591 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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