The table gives information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cities in the same week in May 2017.
The table shows the temperatures and the time of sunrise and sunset in two different cities during 3 days of a week in May 2017.
It is clear to see that average temperatures in Mumbai is higher than ones in Moscow. By contrast, the hours of daylight is longer in Moscow.
In terms of temperatures, Mumbai is hotter than Moscow that the highest sunrise temperatures in Mumbai is 34 Celsius degree in Saturday. Friday and Sunday have same sunrise temperatures at 33 degree. And the sunset temperatures in this city do not decreased significantly which maintained at 29 degree in three days. On the other hand, there has a slight increase in sunrise temperatures of Moscow although they are mostly lower than ones in Mumbai. The sunrise temperatures went up from 8 in Friday to 13 degree in Sunday. While the sunset temperatures fluctuated in the period of time.
The hours of daylight in Moscow are longer than ones in Mumbai. The reason is the sunrise time in Moscow is earlier, at about 4 a.m and the sunset time is 10 p.m, which is later than 7 p.m in Mumbai.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 525, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rom 8 in Friday to 13 degree in Sunday. While the sunset temperatures fluctuated in t...
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Line 9, column 573, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e sunset temperatures fluctuated in the period of time. The hours of daylight in Moscow a...
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Line 13, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rise time in Moscow is earlier, at about 4 a.m and the sunset time is 10 p.m, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66842105263 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73040234268 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4465230727 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6363636364 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20707872296 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942637475158 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910068361649 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159509738177 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114496014674 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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