You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graphs compare and contrast the proportion of citizens born in Australia and rural people born outside Australia growing up in urban, rural, and town from 1995 to 2010
As can be seen from the charts, one can see that the number of citizens born in and outside of Australia took the highest position during the period. On the contrary, the figure of town people born in and outside Australia in town areas increased steadily.
Looking at the first bar chart, during 1995 the percentage of urban people who were born outside Australia stood at the first rank with 60%. The similar trend was seen at the total of Australian born inside, which was around 50%. In contrast, the rate of civils who were born inside and outside was significant lower, which was 20% and nearly 10% respectively.
The remaining bar graphs represented the same trend. Specifically, the proportion of citizens born inside and outside Australia witnessed at the biggest figure, which were nearly 62% and 80% respectively. On the other hand, the number of people who were born in town and rural areas inside and outside Australia decreased dramatically, which was around under 20% for each area. Finally. The number of people born outside was the smallest, which was under approximately 15%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ich was around under 20% for each area. Finally. The number of people born outside was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97663551402 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54643743508 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453271028037 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4327433243 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361831915936 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165580721705 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904795537654 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258463630318 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567776047442 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.