You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Neighbour,
I am Vendy from the Flat no - 7AHP. I recently moved in into our new home and must say that the society is amazing place to live.
As this is my new home, I am planned to keep a party for my relative and friends. The party is planned for the upcoming weekend at around 6PM and will try to end by 11PM. In the party there will be games, music and food; which also makes me worried as the noise might be loud and might disturb you and other neighbours. I wanted to inform you prior so that you do not get disturb due to the sound of the music played.
Recently moving did not give me chance to me you in person wouldn't that be really great if you can join us for the party, please ask your spouse to do come. For the kids, we have arranged some games aswell. Post their games they can have food and can also sleep in our daughters bedroom. We have arranged a nanny for a day, so you need not worry about the kids.
We would feel really happy if you and your husband can join us for our home welcoming party. Looking forward to see you both.
Regards,
Vendy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... not give me chance to me you in person wouldnt that be really great if you can join us...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...r home welcoming party. Looking forward to see you both. Regards, Vendy
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1320754717 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92339344662 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4878371628 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281073185594 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864009939035 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531498372112 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150375111483 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482778762885 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.