Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been a considerable debate as to how developed countries can play their part in betterment of underdeveloped countries. It is a known fact that countries with a stable economy helps the needy and poor countries to resolve their issues but unfortunately this does not help the poor countries to overcome their poverty concern. Some people believe that developed countries should opt other means to help the needy country to strengthen their economy. I strongly agree with this phenomenon, i shall explain my stance with valid reasoning and examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, predominantly, the developed countries are lending their helping hand by financial aiding the poor countries but unfortunately the required aid does not reach the needy and is distributed among the corrupt authorities. This has been a greatest dilemma of poor countries for a long time. Alongside financial aid, the rich countries can provide career opportunities to the youth of poor country which will not only benefit the poor country's economic condition but also participate in the economic stability of the helping country. For instance, Google Company from the US has been investing and creating job opportunities in India that it is equally beneficial for both the countries.
To elucidate my stance further, helping countries can also build some organizations in the needy country that are owned and controlled but the rich countries and are solely responsible for the educational reforms and poverty eradication; thus eliminating the chances of corruption. Just like the United Nation, a country level reform organizations to be build in order to provide the basic necessities of life to the poor masses.
To recapitulate the aforementioned, undoubtedly, the advanced countries can play an extended part in the development and stability of the needy country. Therefore, i instate my stance that helping countries needs to come a step further in order to uplift the unprivileged countries other than financial help by foreign job offers and reform centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35889570552 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05298567267 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506134969325 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3478553352 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431278224633 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182233390418 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105817003031 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287748418236 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398742373394 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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