After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Elena,
I am Amy Barrens. I was under your care in ward number 30. A year ago, I met with a major life threatening accident on Smith Street and was taken to to Life Care Hospital where I was under treatment for six months and you were in charge of me. I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude because of which I have recovered speedily.
When I was brought in it was you who constantly encourage me not to lose my spirit and have faith, giving me strength to fight. There were several nurses who attended me while I was recovering but your mother like care and concern help me get better. In fact, I can distinctly recall the flowers that you brought for me from the prayer offerings. Furthermore, you ensured that I was properly taken care of with special attention even in your absence.
I would like to invite you to visit my home with your family. My family wants to take the opportunity to thank you for your support and care. I look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Amy Barrens
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Elena, I am Amy Barrens. I was under your care ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... accident on Smith Street and was taken to to Life Care Hospital where I was under tr...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to seeing you soon. Yours sincerely, Amy Barrens
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46524064171 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43365452945 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0089497273 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5833333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247990831046 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103971207068 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540486415019 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181984126093 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594465072719 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.