The bar chart below shows the US' top ten processed food export markets.
The chart compares the expenditure on consumer goods between the two countries the UK and France in the year 2010. It mainly focuses on the 5 consumer goods namely, cars, computers, books, perfume, cameras. Both the countries lie almost in the same ballpark in cars computers and perfume while a much higher difference is seen books and cameras.
With respect to cars, the UK spends nearly 450,000 pounds sterling while France spends a much higher 400,000 pounds sterling. These are the highest consumer goods bought in both countries. France's expenditure is less than the UK in two other areas: Books and Cameras. In books, the expenditure by the UK stands at 400,000 pounds sterling while France's stands at just near 300,000 pounds sterling. The expenditure on cameras is interesting to observe as the difference in this area is the highest than others. While the UK spent nearly 350,000 pounds sterling, France spent only 150,000 pounds sterling, the least of any goods in the whole survey. It is less than half of what was spent in the UK.
Coming to the areas where France has an upper hand, money spent on computers in France was around 375,000 pounds sterling as opposed to 350,000 pounds sterling in the UK. The difference is by a very narrow margin. perfume is the other area where France stands at 200,000 pounds sterling while the UK stands at just below 150,000 pounds sterling. The difference is more than 50,000 pounds sterling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Perfume
... difference is by a very narrow margin. perfume is the other area where France stands a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40540831693 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436734693878 0.622605031667 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4734867626 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7142857143 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0118104686627 0.216113520407 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00537830840593 0.0766984524023 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0135508776518 0.0603063233224 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0124600786531 0.12726935374 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00953430033338 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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