A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
a.give details of the course you took at the University
b. explain why you recommend the university
c. give some advice about how to apply
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear______________,
Dear Smriti,
I received your letter yesterday and am glad to hear that you are also interested to study computer admin course in NIIT University. I hope you have attended career counselling that was provided to us in school and have taken sufficient time to take the decision.
Let me first provide you with the details of the course. The course has 2 modules, namely, system admin and network admin. The system admin course is further divided into two components. It will cater to both windows and linux operating system.
Coming to my recommendation for NIIT University, I feel this is the best place to study this course. As you know, I had done lot of research on Universities before joining NIIT. The conclusion of my research was that NIIT provides this course at a very reasonable fees with world class infrastructure. They also provide study material for the certification exam which was lagging in other Universities. Another important factor which gives extra edge to NIIT is that it is world renowned and has placements in some of top MNC companies.
Lastly I will brief you on the methods for applying. The university has both online and offline application forms. Both would need you to pay a small fee. However, my advice would be to apply online. It not only saves time and doesn't have unnecessary trips to post office but also allows you to pay the fees online. If you go for offline application then you need to get bank challan for the fee payment and have to send the application within a week to the admission department.
I hope I was able to clarify all your doubts and hope to see you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Madhulika
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'feis'?
Suggestion: feis
...ovides this course at a very reasonable fees with world class infrastructure. They a...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...pply online. It not only saves time and doesnt have unnecessary trips to post office b...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, so, then, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73611111111 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67957487818 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6972767049 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7894736842 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26979540357 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759554521149 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496613817383 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126032132711 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308407995546 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.