letter to the bank manager, inquiring about loan details.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Kanwal Kohli, one of the old customers of your bank. My customer id is 837024601. I am writing this letter to inquire about the bank loan details. I am determined to start an online store for men’s clothing. Please let me know different types of loan for which I can apply and their interest rates.
First of all, I need to rent space for the warehouse. I will use it to store raw material. Secondly, I need to hire IT consulting company for creating the e-commerce website. For all of this, I would at least require a loan amount of 100 thousand dollars.
I am hoping to repay the amount within 24 months. I could request you to give me the best proposal, as I am associated with your bank from a very long time.
I am eagerly waiting for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kanwal Kohli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with your bank from a very long time. I am eagerly waiting for your reply. Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45394736842 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51731366238 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677631578947 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9182532857 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.0769230769 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176770842436 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645665215239 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160989375196 0.0603063233224 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867990912224 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1106119886 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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