Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it positive or negative development?
While statistics can be refuted, undoubtedly there is convincing evidence that the advertising industry has grown beyond recognition over recent years. Although this development associated with some benefits like increased public awareness and also some drawbacks such as the popularity of Materialistic approaches or unhealthy diets, however, it seems that the shortcomings outweigh the benefits.
To begin with, clearly, advertisements have some potential merits which capable people to benefit from. The educational role of ads is the first and perhaps the most important role. To illustrate this, in comparison to last decades, when the commercials were not as popular as today, the public awareness of different subjects has increased significantly. For instance, people are able to gain significant information about the last technological inventions like the recent model of electrical devices such as the camera, computers, TV sets or staff like that. The second positive aspect that is associated with ads is more competition among producers that causes more reduction in prices. For example, in the dairy industry where there are lots of producers, they can attract more consumers by offering a lower price on their advertisements. Admittedly, however, these positive aspects pave the way for many negative consequences such as consumerism.
By contrast, commercials bring a new set of concerns. First of all, they use some tricks which create unreal needs. Since producers concern about sales promotion and they want to capture more market share, ads are able to persuade people to buy things that they do not need. The temptation is one of the certain goals of advertising, consequently, there are some potential problems that are certain to arise such as Materialistic approaches promotion, and a wide variety of environmental damages. Another negative point is the detrimental effect of commercials on the eating habits of society. For example, advertisements for fast foods or unhealthy snacks can change people’s diets, especially the young generation. This alarming trend poses serious threats to health. Obesity or high blood pressure because of the overconsumption of fast food is the next epidemiologic challenge facing today's doctors.
In conclusion, I uphold this conviction that in spite of advantages like educating people, advertisements have more negative impacts that in the long-term can cause many potential problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6307277628 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11311536485 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601078167116 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5736637155 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.055555556 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163078406377 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448051637166 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593030035893 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103619704241 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495454617262 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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