you are renting an apartment and the neighbours are disturbing you. write a letter to your landlord explaining what the problem is, what do you do to solve the problem and what action you want the owner to take.

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you are renting an apartment and the neighbours are disturbing you. write a letter to your landlord explaining what the problem is, what do you do to solve the problem and what action you want the owner to take.

Dear Sir,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing to inform you about the consistent disturbance caused by neighbours by playing loud music. Let me explain the situation in detail.

To elucidate as you are aware that some bachelors have recently moved to the third floor of the building hence they consistently play loud music and organize late night parties which affect our daily routine and eventually has made our lives miserable. Although we rented the second floor of the house as we found it to be a peaceful place, therefore, I thought that such a place would be able to bring down the stress levels however from the past few weeks my life has become miserable. Additionally, for your information, I recently requested our neighbours not to play loud music especially at night while we are sleeping but they never listen and keep on repeating the same activities. I would inform you that my patience has run out, therefore, need your cooperation to have a word with your new tenants and warn them not to play loud music.

Lastly, if we don’t see things improving in the next week then I would request you to refund my security deposit as I would then like to move to a new place.
I look forward to your cooperation.
Yours Sincerely
Saud

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to your cooperation. Yours Sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, so, then, therefore, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70044052863 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58887700571 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63436123348 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2557074918 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159772537847 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723075403799 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543878348096 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106752973759 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809213805232 0.0580467560999 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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