You are renting a house in an English-speaking country, and the landlord has been helpful during your stay. Now your friend is interested in renting your place. Please write a letter to your landlord to inform your friend that you will be moving out.
In your letter
tell your landlord that you are leaving and explain why
thank your landlord for being helpful
recommend your friend as a prospective tenant.
Dear Miss Han,
I writing this letter in order to tell you that I am moving out of the apartment and my friend, Xiao is interested in renting it after my lease terminates. I found a new job in Hamilton area with higher salary, but I need to work on-site. This is the reason why I want to move out and live closer to the new office, so that I could save some time commuting to work.
I have been living in the apartment for three years and I really appreciate all your help within this period. There was one night when the water pipe in the kitchen broke and I didn’t know how to deal with it. You came immediately and helped fix the pipe after I called you. Also, you lowered the rent for three months in 2020 to help me went through the tough time when I lost my job due to the COVID pandemic. No words could express how thankful I am for what you have done for me.
After I leave, my friend, Xiao wants to be tenant as she paid a visit to the apartment several weeks ago and she really likes it. She is a nice girl and she has a decent job as an accountant. Besides, she is absolutely gifted for cooking and baking. I am pretty confident she would satisfy your requirements for renting the apartment and you would love the food she makes.
Please let me know what you think. Looking forward to your response.
Best wishes,
Jerry
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Miss Han, I writing this letter in order to tell yo...
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Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and you would love the food she makes. Please let me know what you think. Looki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24031007752 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19972082511 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.771433873 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224091032029 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705060678401 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693978282829 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142033217633 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391441895226 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.