Your company sent you abroad to take a course and you want to extend your stay there. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter, you should tell:
* what the benefits of this course are
* what the reasons you want to stay more time
* when you will be back.
Dear Mr Silvagi,
I am writing this letter in connection to my current trip in Canada for the course Advanced CAE Analysis in Automotive Industry.
This course aims at the advanced CAE analytical methodologies and techniques, and their application in automotive engineering, which is extremely beneficial for my job as a CAE engineer. Whatever I learn here could be used in my daily work to boost the efficiency and expand the range of analysis, and this is the reason why you approve my trip.
Now I am asking your permission to extend my stay as the organizer of the course adds a three-day workshop. Their senior engineering specialists would demonstrate how to work on specific models and projects utilizing the methods and skills taught in the course. They could be of great help for me to make use of the techniques much faster and I could show the demonstration to my colleagues so that we could work more efficiently together.
I would return three days after the original schedule if you approve the extension, which is going to be 16th Jun.
I hope you could grant me the permission to stay for three more days. I would be looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Jerry Wang
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Silvagi, I am writing this letter in connection t...
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Line 11, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...permission to stay for three more days. I would be looking forward to your respon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90821256039 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85937291072 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7469430394 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219736100081 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933755097382 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542602056446 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121575841619 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539941328879 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.