You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mrs Lina,
I am writing to inform you of my intended plan to take a break from work and to seek your consent regarding this.
I am preparing to write a professional exam about 5 weeks from now and I need some time off to enable me focus on my exam preparation.
The exam starts on the 3rd of October which is exactly four weeks and three days from today, and I will need to take about 2 - 3 weeks leave in order to intensify my preparation. I would not mind starting my leave anytime from the 15th of September.
Concerning my work, I have spoken with Onyeka and Ifeanyi and they both have agreed to split my work with more of the burden on Ifeanyi being my Relief Officer. Also, I can be contacted on my main line if urgent or more information is need.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Bisi Olatunde.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding this. I am preparing to write a professional exam about 5 weeks from now...
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Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if urgent or more information is need. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Bisi Olatunde.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37974683544 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43024597247 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9553594444 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210310871682 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932530537467 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687050875744 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121386629201 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770665412921 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.