you have bought a new laptop from a reputable company and in a few days of purchase discovered major problems.write a letter to the company. in your letter:
say when you bought it
explain the problems
say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction for a laptop that I bought from your company. I purchased it a week ago on Saturday in 13th of July. After two days, it has not worked perfect, I found major problems.The eject button of Cd player does not work. It has problem with its graphic card, I can not see any image. moreover, I can not use autocad application that needs graphic card. Sometimes the laptops screen suddenly getting dark and none of the keyboard does work.
Therefore, I want to fix it as soon as possible. I called to your company two days ago and they promised me to repair it for about 48 hours. Unfortunately, after two days, no one has contacted me yet. I will wait just for a day. If my problem does not solve, I will complain to customer service association management.
I look forward to your reply.
yours faithfully,
Simin Jalali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... worked perfect, I found major problems.The eject button of Cd player does not work...
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Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... worked perfect, I found major problems.The eject button of Cd player does not work. It h...
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Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
... graphic card, I can not see any image. moreover, I can not use autocad application that...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ment. I look forward to your reply. yours faithfully, Simin Jalali
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eply. yours faithfully, Simin Jalali
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55974842767 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72147601636 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2635613071 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.7692307692 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2307692308 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114064048234 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034230569278 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397803636634 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648597211958 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240237045159 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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