You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear John,
Hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter to tell you something interesting about my country India. I am aware that you are always excited to know and get familiar regarding the culture and people here. Recently, an event held in my province that was highlighted on the front page of a renowned newspaper, The Tribune. I was waiting from past few days to narrate that story to you.
You might be aware of the protest that farmers are doing to save their land and occupation from private companies. Yesterday, a 80 year old man who was unable to stand or walk, also showed up at the protest site to save his fields. This showcased the love and attachment that farmers carry for their farms. Several videos went viral internationally within few minutes on various platform such as Facebook, Instagram, and WhatsApp groups th motivated around thousand's of people to come and fight for their rights. None of them want to loose their income that is based on farming, as 90% of the population in my province is dependent on it.
My father, brother, and I also took part in that strike after watching that video, as that video of old man put a remarkable impact on our minds and encouraged us to be a part of it. Someone have said that "Together we can win" that is 100% true .
I hope it will be a quite inspiring story for you. Hope to listen some news or story about your country.
Thank you.
Regards,
Karamdeep kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tion from private companies. Yesterday, a 80 year old man who was unable to stand...
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Line 6, column 534, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... for their rights. None of them want to loose their income that is based on farming, ...
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Line 8, column 192, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...couraged us to be a part of it. Someone have said that 'Together we can win&apo...
^^^^
Line 8, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ether we can win' that is 100% true . I hope it will be a quite inspiring ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66153846154 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51371949314 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5887811811 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148211934599 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472123563338 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711596532205 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784009665645 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684311018594 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.