You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Singh from the Part time MBA evening class. I am writing this letter to inform you that, I will not be able to continue with my Part-time course due my recent commitment with my employer.
Recently, I have been promoted as the project manager for the upcoming project because of which I will not be able to attend the evening lecture as my work and lecture timing will clash with each other. To complete this course, I will have to be present at the college for the practical and for my written exams which wont be possible as I will be busy in the new project.
This is a great opportunity for my career and I understand that this course would have also helped me to gain knowledge and grow. Hence I have decided that I will continue the course once the project is finished.
I hope you will consider my request
Yours Sincerely,
Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
Dear Mr. Smith, I am Singh from the Part time MBA evening class. I am writing this le...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...o helped me to gain knowledge and grow. Hence I have decided that I will continue the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4625 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33689831828 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7479360663 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217602690567 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112088638818 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630319666877 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145557038205 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737529991104 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.