Recently abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant ex

Essay topics:

Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many women are rapidly opting for abortion which is now becoming the main hub of controversies. It is argued by many that these cases should be made legal whilst others believe that legal interference is not required. This essay will discuss both views and provide evidence as to why opting for abortion should become legal by all.

On the one hand, many women think that government laws and legalities should not be applied on abortion. Indeed, continuing with the pregnancy and having a child should be a women's own personal choice. These women know what's best for them and their families and hence should be granted freedom of their choice and bodies. For instance, whether a woman wants a child or not is genuinely decided by them during their first trimester and no women chooses to opt for abortion during late pregnancy. Therefore, women should be trusted and no government restrictions should be placed on abortion.

On the other hand, most women believe that it should be made legal as many ladies or girls selecting for abortion are either poor or victims of sexual assault and abuse. They are not aware of their pregnancy during early days, mostly due to shock and trauma. These females do not have required finances or knowledge to raise a child and are not ready to take up this huge responsibility. For example, many rape victims in India are forced to take care of their child since abortion is illegal. These females later go into depression and take drastic steps by harming themselves. Hence, the need for making abortion legal is to protect these women/girls.

To sum up, abortion should be made legal by all irrespective of richness or poverty, a victim of sexual abuse or by choice as these women are aware whether they can take up the responsibility of bringing up a child or not.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8141025641 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5289253668 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6022451851 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228855300047 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921926566918 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055767594778 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158655141105 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06554364499 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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