you have lost an item of value on train. write letter to railway, in your letterdescribe the itemexplain where and when you left itsay what action you would like the company to take

Essay topics:

you have lost an item of value on train. write letter to railway, in your letter
describe the item
explain where and when you left it
say what action you would like the company to take

Dear sir/madam,

I would like to bring to your attention regarding my language which I lost during my recent journey on a national train.

I was traveling from London to Northampton through national train on Monday 28th June 2019. When I de-boarded the train at Northampton station I got to know that I have forgotten to carry one of my language. It was red color American Tourist baggage which contains my cloths and some important documents.

Would appreciate if you could check the lost and found items received during the week to found out, if, It has been lying there. If, not, could you please check the CCTV footage of the train to identify if someone has taken along with him/her so that I can lodge a police complaint about the possible theft.

I am looking forward to hear from you.

Thanking you
Abc

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ational train on Monday 28th June 2019. When I de-boarded the train at Northampton s...
^^^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...possible theft. I am looking forward to hear from you. Thanking you Abc
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45888255007 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680555555556 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2994675428 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219710951104 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943225229771 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573725439641 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112559240667 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346347680363 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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