you have lost an item of value on train. write letter to railway, in your letter
describe the item
explain where and when you left it
say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your notice that, I forgot my laptop while travelling on one the train.
I was carring a Gucci leather bag, which had Dell of color white, Apple logo embedded on it, also, small sticker of spider, pasted by my son,
I was travelling on 20th June 2019, from New Delhi to "Ram-Agar" via train no 1234, departed at 5 pm. The coach was A1, 34 number birth, train reached around 4 am at "Ram-agar". Once I reached home, there was no laptop bag in my language. It was probably left under the blanket I used.
Therefore, I would need assistance to recover my bag, as the laptop was used for my official purpose, and has confidential information in it. Thus, I would request, once bag is found, please send it back on my address or let me know, if I have to collect is personally.
Yours faithfully
abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llect is personally. Yours faithfully abc
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61146496815 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04447938411 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726114649682 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7807817526 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695676668622 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368498587584 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276576870821 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044419871098 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037867252669 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.