You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work. Write a letter to your manager and say
– What problem do you have?
– What difficulties does this create for you?
– What could be done about it?
Dear Mr Thomson,
I want to bring to your attention an issue which has been affecting my productivity from the last 2 days; it is related to my workstation that is not functioning properly.
The problem that I am facing from the past 2 days is the unexpected shut down of my desktop without any prior notification. Sometimes, while I am working on an important presentation, the personal computer will turn off unexpectedly. Owing to such malfunctioned workstation, I must start over again; apparently, taking more time and resulting in reduced productivity.
Since my team and I are working together on a crucial project, such delays push us behind the schedule. Therefore, I would sincerely request you to either replace my faulty desktop or fix this issue as soon as possible in order to meet deadlines on time and be as productive as I was before the problem arose. Do let me know if I have to follow any specific procedure in order to subdue this problem.
Please respond at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04663865368 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717514124294 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2759631193 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175582576351 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646917475702 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419035494678 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902823312092 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410022723796 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.