You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern abo

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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

explain why you are writing

express concern about the missing card

ask them what they intend to do

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any address

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to let you that my new bank card was missing from the envelope which I received from your bank. On 16th June 2019, I received a letter from your bank for acknowledging the bank card which I applied last month. When I opened the envelope, I was shocked! I found only the acknowledgement receipt but not the bank card.

I think you are aware that my bank account has been linked with the card. Now I am very much worried about it because I my entire savings is in that account. If the card gets into the wrong hands, they would take away all the money leaving the account empty.

I want you to block the card as soon as possible so that nobody could withdraw the money. Moreover, I would request you to send me a new card by this month which could be helpful for my purchases.

Please do the needful in this regard. Looking forward to hearing form you.

Thank you,

Yours sincerely,

Felix

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46590909091 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26130653194 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9048214207 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4545454545 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464355236375 0.216113520407 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164272567571 0.0766984524023 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145910014474 0.0603063233224 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224547207065 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20526776998 0.0580467560999 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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