You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Alex,
Hope you are doing splendidly. I am writing to tell you that recently I have shifted my home to new place near kallyanpur. The main reason of shifting my home is due to long distance of my office place.
The new home is terrific, huge open space, lots of green trees, playground for children and many more. Yes, it is true that the house space is a bit smaller compared to my previous home but the outside environment outweigh this disadvantage. this area is a lot cooler and calmer really suits to any one who loves peace environment.
I desperatly wants you to come and visit my place. I couldn't wait to seeing you.
Best regards,
Rahat Hussain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...environment outweigh this disadvantage. this area is a lot cooler and calmer really ...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...a lot cooler and calmer really suits to any one who loves peace environment. I despe...
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Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...wants you to come and visit my place. I couldnt wait to seeing you. Best regards, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 555.0 937.175257732 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 206.0 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51957613278 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716666666667 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8832267168 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122287898705 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559693443792 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585656870667 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983119667252 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564319918927 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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