You ordered equipment online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company.
In your letter, you should tell:
giving the details about the equipment
explain the damage
suggest what you want the manager to do.
Hello Sir or Madam,
Greeting of the day, I am writing this letter to inform you about the product that I bought from your company's website was damaged when I received delivery.
I purchased LG's 22 inch full high definition monitor screen with Boat's 2.1 black portable speaker on 23rd February, 2020. The delivery date showing on the website was 27th February, 2020.
I was excited and eagerly waiting for screen and speaker as both were important for my office work. But when I received courier and opened it, I was astonished to saw the broken screen and have not tried to connect to my system as it could be dangerous, even it was not possible to check the screen due to malfunction. Although, speaker was in a good shape and working properly.
I want to replace my screen as soon as possible because either it will hamper my office work. I am looking forward an instant action on my letter as I am one of the older customer of your shop.
Reagrds,
Amit Mishra
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'screen' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'screens'.
Suggestion: screens
...Gs 22 inch full high definition monitor screen with Boats 2.1 black portable speaker o...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'February 2020'.
Suggestion: February 2020
...oats 2.1 black portable speaker on 23rd February, 2020. The delivery date showing on the websi...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'February 2020'.
Suggestion: February 2020
...ry date showing on the website was 27th February, 2020. I was excited and eagerly waiting f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60571428571 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40437696117 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2324694169 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148369034675 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529872076699 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802878781604 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104213931932 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113430256851 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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